Breaking waves
waves drown
drown fear
fear bound.
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Soul aches
aches deep
deep endless
endless sleep.
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Chasing silence
silence screams
screams echo
echo dreams.
***
Find peace
peace inside
inside voices
voices cry.
***
Still heart
heart free
free me
beneath the sea.
CARPENTER'S QUILL 
I really enjoyed this poem – I am not a poet but I love the style. Is there a word for this type of style? I thought it was really creative and that it flowed beautifully. 🙂
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Thank you! I’m not sure what this writing style is called. (wish I knew the proper poem lingo!) I just kept typing small rhythmic lines until it turned into this. My emotions are deep right now, so simplicity seemed the best option.
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Simplicity is good – sometimes it can become too complicated! I just wondered if there was a particular style as you have used the last word as the first word of the next line. If you just typed it randomly without being aware then kudos to you! 🙂
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Yes! I thought it was a unique way of letting out ‘simply’ my deepest emotional moment of today. I wish my randomness took this form new often. 😉
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I was just about to ask if this form had a name. This is brilliant.
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Very much appreciated! I’m looking for similar styles to see what the proper description/name is. If there is none, I wonder what I should call it…..hmmm…
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If you don’t happen to find one, I have a suggestion! A “Quillion Reverb”… No? :p No one has ever accused me of cleverness in titles…
Hopefully it doesn’t have a name so you can claim it! 🙂
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Ooooo….Love that!
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It’s all yours! 🙂
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Reblogged this on We Drink Because We're Poets and commented:
Check out Carpenter’s Quill, my friends.
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This form is called, “Chain Verse” poetry (damn you Google). I had no idea! I still think “Quillion Reverb” is way more awesome. Don’t you think? 😉
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Excellent. Following
Jim
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Thank you for the follow, and kind word!
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My pleasure.
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Loved it!
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Thank you, and appreciate the follow!
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Lovely poem and like your illustrations…following!
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Thank you! I encourage you to check out this site. His art is amazing: http://m.thecoolist.com/shipwreck-art-gallery-by-andreas-franke/
Thanks for the follow! I’m glad you enjoyed the piece.
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Just had a peek..beautiful work he does and not only shipwrecks! Thanks for indicating it to me! 🙂
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