Free Me: Beneath The Sea

Beneath The Sea

Breaking waves

waves drown

drown fear

fear bound.


Soul aches

aches deep

deep endless

endless sleep.


Chasing silence

silence screams

screams echo

echo dreams.


Find peace

peace inside

inside voices

voices cry.


Still heart

heart free

free me

beneath the sea.


19 thoughts on “Free Me: Beneath The Sea

  1. I really enjoyed this poem – I am not a poet but I love the style. Is there a word for this type of style? I thought it was really creative and that it flowed beautifully. πŸ™‚


    1. Thank you! I’m not sure what this writing style is called. (wish I knew the proper poem lingo!) I just kept typing small rhythmic lines until it turned into this. My emotions are deep right now, so simplicity seemed the best option.


      1. Simplicity is good – sometimes it can become too complicated! I just wondered if there was a particular style as you have used the last word as the first word of the next line. If you just typed it randomly without being aware then kudos to you! πŸ™‚


      1. If you don’t happen to find one, I have a suggestion! A “Quillion Reverb”… No? :p No one has ever accused me of cleverness in titles… :/ Hopefully it doesn’t have a name so you can claim it! πŸ™‚



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